Thursday, April 18, 2013

Don't Meddle With My Mettle

It's not often I see either meddle or mettle in a manuscript, although I sometimes do see the occasional medal.

Mettle is defined as the courage to go on.  It often gets tested in battle.

Meddle is what your best friend does when she tries to fix you up on a blind date.  Or, you can also think of the most popular verison of meddling:





{I just had a flashback to when my son was younger and could watch Scooby Doo all day (and all night!)}

So, when in doubt, ask yourself: is my character engaging in Scooby Doo and the gang behavior by meddling in something?  Or is my character filled with determination and courage to continue her quest?

Friday, April 5, 2013

Thoughts On Reviews

I recently had an author call me to talk about his reviews on Amazon.  He's gotten several reviews on his three books, mostly positive.  But there's always someone who wants to spoil the party, so he has some lower reviews as well.

He was thinking of stopping his current series and starting a new one, all based on the comments in the reviews.  My advice to him: DON'T.

1) Not every book will appeal to every reader.  Sad, but true: your book, no matter how much you worked on it, no matter how much of your heart and soul you put into it, no matter how much you worked, edited, re-worked, and edited some more will still not be for everyone.  Think of the classics, traditional or new: The Odyssey, Shakespeare, Moby Dick, Anne of Green Gables, Pride and Prejudice, Stephen King, and more - they have reviews and ratings that run the gamut.  

2) The strength and impact of the review matters. Does the review say something to the effect of: I hate (your genre) and this book sucked? Did the review actually point out inconsistencies, grammar issues (heavens, no!), provide issues that you could logically discuss?  Or was it basically a rant, offering a personal opinion? There's practically nothing you can do to change a person's opinion about something, so why waste your time stewing over it?

3) Some people are mean.  You know who they are in your real life, and how to avoid deal with them.  But online, you can't employ the same methods.  Responding will generally get you more trouble than you started with and could end up consuming your energy - not a good place to be.  Accept that some people enjoy pointing out the perceived flaws and failings; choose to be someone who enjoys letting stuff like that go.

4) Realize that readers make up their own minds. Personally, I don't put much stock in any review online.  I'm a little judge-y on how the review itself is written (please, dear God, save me from reviews written in all caps or in text-speak!).  I look at the overall numbers and if there are more one- and two-star reviews than the others, I'll take a peek at what those say.  I had another author share that she particularly appreciated a one-star review from someone who NEVER READ THE BOOK (insert your own sarcastic tone here).  Reviews like that get tossed out of my mind and almost have the opposite effect - I'll read the book just to prove them wrong!

I'd like to leave you with this final thought: as an author, you have worked hard to put out a piece of art.  Art is subjective; there will be no two people who get the exact same thing out of it. But that's ok.  You didn't really do it for them, did you?  You did it to get rid of those voices in your head (really, once they start telling you what to have for breakfast, that's when you should see the head-shrinker!); you did it to explore an issue; you did it to create a new world and answer the question what if? And you should be proud of it.  After all, not everyone has the talent and drive to do that (me included!)

 

Monday, April 1, 2013

Author Interview - Edward Coburn

Let's welcome this month's author, Edward Coburn.  He's writing a series (The Dog Who Ate the ???), a twenty-six title series that focuses on Adam, a physic "finder" living in a small town, as well as The Last Killer Standing.




1)      What were your favorite books growing up? In grade school and junior high, I’d probably say SciFi, though I did read a bit of Tarzan as well. In high school I read mostly sports books where the star was in high school and, of course, he got the girl. Later I read most anything: SciFi, adventure, and detective.
2)      Now that you have, let’s say—some life experience, what would you tell your younger self? Get serious about something and really try to do your best and not waste so darn much time.
3)      Describe your typical day. Unfortunately I leave for word at the DMV (I am a computer programmer) at 7:00 and my day starts at 7:30. At breaks and lunch, I try to make a few notes to work with in the evening (we’re not allowed to use our work computer for anything personal and also not allowed to bring any computer devices on site such as laptops). Sometimes I run to the library for research or using one of their computers. I leave for home at 4:30, get home at 5:00, supper and then work for a couple of hours. Then a couple hours of TV with the wife. I’d really rather write then, too, but domestic tranquility trumps writing.
4)      Who is your favorite character in your books? I’d have to say Adam in my series The Dog Who Ate The ???. He is psychic and rich, two things I wish I was. His psychic dog, Bagel the beagle, is fun as well.
5)      What do you do when writer’s block shows up, settles in, and makes itself comfortable? I’d have to say writer’s block is really not an issue with me; writer’s laziness is, however. It seems that I am never short of ideas but, sometimes, I just don’t feel like writing (especially after programming for eight hours).
6)      Do you find yourself pulling details from “real life” or does your imagination rule the roost? I use a bit of real life, but most of my ideas come from movies, TV, reading, and listening to books on tape while driving to and from work. I have a very fertile imagination and many times a word or two a character somewhere says will launch an idea. I wrote an entire book (The Last Killer Standing) from an idea for the title of a book. I thought the book would be about something; it wasn’t, but the idea was so good, I used it to write the book.
7)      What was the first manuscript you wrote (even if it never saw the light of day)? I wrote a book called “Sky Search to Turon,” a SciFi book that I don’t remember much about but I do remember it had something to do with Acid wars. The interesting thing is I read a book years later in which there were Acid wars.
8)      Have you ever pursued traditional publishing? Or did you go straight for indie publishing? For many years but, honestly, I think it’s a good thing they weren’t interested. Especially in today’s publishing world. They would have to offer me a lot of money before I would give up the convenience of epublishing.
9)      What Works In Progress are brewing?  Any target dates for publication? I am about to turn over the fourth Dog book “The Dog Who Ate The Drawing” to my editor (Faith, of course). I’m excited about the book because it is about a search for a gold mine and people like treasure hunts. I have already been making notes for the fifth book which will be Elephant and the sixth which will be Flintlock.
10)   How can fans reach you? 
Website is edwardjcoburn.com
Blog for the dog books is http://dogwhoate.blogspot.com/
Blog for The Last Killer Standing is http://lastkillerstanding.blogspot.com/

 

Monday, March 25, 2013

Story Bibles and Character Development

Over the last few months, I've tweeted some great sites to check out story bibles and character development worksheets.  But, if you don't follow me on Twitter (hey, why don't you follow me on Twitter?  It's super easy - find me at @FaithProofing), I thought you might like to see what I posted over there.

So here are some resources for story bibles:

Authors: what is a Story Bible and why you need one http://brev.is/cf84

Using Story Bibles for Series http://brev.is/gf84

Authors: use this tv series bible development for your series!  http://brev.is/kf84

Color coding your Series Bible http://brev.is/mf84

Authors: use a Story Bible to keep track of your story http://brev.is/of84

Character and Story Organizers for #Authors http://brev.is/Uf84


And here are some resources for character development worksheets:

Authors: 100 Character Development Questions your characters should be able to answer http://brev.is/Vf84

Authors: 20 questions for your characters http://brev.is/Wf84

Authors: use the Proust questionnaire to add depth to your characters http://brev.is/Xf84

More Character Development worksheets for authors http://brev.is/Tf84

365 Character Questions http://brev.is/Zf84

Authors: some more Character Worksheets http://brev.is/Rf84

Thursday, March 14, 2013

10 Random Facts

10 Random Facts About Me:

1) I grew up in a house that was built by my ancestors in the 1700s.  I was the sixth generation to live there; my son spent the first three months of his life there before we moved across the street into my grandfather's house.

2) My favorite winter activity was sitting on the floor in front of the furnace vent in the kitchen and reading a book (instead of setting the table or eating my vegetables).

3) When I was little, there was a magnetic board on the cabinet wall that I use to make up my own words or practice my spelling. I could spend hours moving those little plastic letters with the magnets in them.  (And I never ate any of the magnets - not even when my brothers dared me to!)

4) I met my husband when he came into the bookstore I worked in and he ordered a book (Mr. Boston's Bartending Guide).  My co-worker was all like, "I'm calling that guy when the book comes in." I was all like, "Whatever."

5) I spent the summer before college in Cordova, Alaska.  The plan was I'd go on a fishing boat and earn some big bucks before I started college.  Once I figured out what that actually meant, I got myself a job at the local daycare and babysat on the side.

6) I am a sucker for Fred Astaire movies.  Favorite: Funny Face. (Ask me tomorrow and I might change my answer to Daddy Long Legs.)

7) Wanted to be an ice skater when I was young. But I hated the cold. And there was no ice skating rink I could try to get my parents to take me to - just the town pond.  And I couldn't actually stay up on my skates - down on my butt was my typical skating posture.

8) I have two older brothers, but my parents were foster parents, so on any given day, I could gain or lose a foster brother or sister. The most we ever had were three foster kids, so there'd be six kids at the dinner table.

9) I got rid of my alarm clock when my son went off to college.  Haven't looked back!

10) I am a big General Hospital fan (much to my husband's dismay).


Thursday, March 7, 2013

Comma Rhapsody

Ok, I was going to write a post about comma use with appositives.  But in researching on the Internet, as often happens, I got sidetracked.  (And I'd like to point out the use of commas in that previous sentence for the appositive "as often happens")

I found this gem to explain all the uses of commas and I hope you find it entertaining and informative.